Talk:Lunafreya Nox Fleuret/GA1

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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 01:05, 8 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be reviewing this. Sorry for the big delay like with Samurai Champloo. First of all:

There is little introduction to who is Noctis. Simply add that he is the game's protagonist.
Same with Tabata. Director right?
Add the year of the release of the movie.

The commentary of Stella goes a bit far such as how Nomura wanted to illustrate her.
"Despite negative reactions from fans, Tabata defended the change as the best option, allowing fans to continue liking Stella and view her replacement as a new character without preconceptions or expectations.[13][14]" Doesn't this belong more to the reception section?

"featuring Aerith Gainsborough in Final Fantasy VII." everybody knows this but I would explain that VII is also another Final Fantasy game.
I would recommend putting Tabata's free image since he is highly responsible for this character.
"The game's Yoshitaka Amano-designed logo art, initially described as a goddess, represented a version of Lunafreya." Is this a scrapped idea or related with the whole oracle?

I would add explain that Eos is a world (unless I forgot something from the game)

This all look reads nice but I would suggest adding intros to each paragraph since they have different focus.

That's all. Revise this and I'll pass it.Tintor2 (talk) 01:05, 8 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Tintor2: Hopefully addressed everything above. It's been somewhat refreshing working on an article for such a disliked character. Like Zero (Drakengard) all over again. --ProtoDrake (talk) 07:58, 8 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]